Peerage - Partial self-nomination: several others have contributed, but I have just rewritten some parts of the article. I think that it provides a good, comprehensive consideration of the Peerage. -- Emsworth 22:44, Feb 14, 2004 (UTC)
Although I've worked on this article some, I think Emsworth's thorough-going revision is excellent, and this'd be a good choice for featured article. john 09:59, 16 Feb 2004 (UTC)
The body of the article is ready. The introduction needs work. The language of the opening parahraph needs to clearly lay out the concepts and history in easy-to-understand descriptions. If it takes two or three paragraphs to do so, that is ok. I'd help out, but I am naive on the subject at hand. Kingturtle 20:14, 21 Feb 2004 (UTC)
I have revised the introduction; please inform me if it is inadequate. -- Emsworth 21:51, Feb 21, 2004 (UTC)
OK, I support it now. Kingturtle 22:17, 21 Feb 2004 (UTC)
